put it to the test
it's the best
there's no contest
just sit and digest
what's in your mind
to tough to contemplate?
a little to irate?
it's fate
new thoughts to create
a complex, intriguing kind
don't need to be convinced
that things are getting tense
the mind is our only defense.
locked within a fence
is where we are
being crushed by the fright
plans are not finite
but i know we must unite
and attempt to fight
what they've done has gone too far
when you call out to the sky
do you get a reply?
or is intelligent conversation denied
i'll help get your hands untied
with each other we'll do it all
take all of your wit
push it to the limit
everyone will benefit
if we all keep close-knit
together we stand tall














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Mentally unstable
yeah, you know, it does sort of remind me of something by them, now that you mention it
i always put music to stuff i'm writing and reading.
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All the good music has already been written by people with wigs and stuff.
~ Oscar Wilde
My music is music about music.
~ Ludwig van Beethoven
When I read, It read it as a Linkin Park song-- With a beat~
"when you call out to the sky
do you get a reply?"
What a nice line-- You could take it so many ways.
If you do edit out the kinks, could you keep that one line still intact? :3
Awesome work :'D
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and yes i can keep that line the same
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All the good music has already been written by people with wigs and stuff.
~ Oscar Wilde
My music is music about music.
~ Ludwig van Beethoven
But, I fail to see anything that needs rewriting. It all flows together, it pulled me in. Very interesting. c:
Ok, 2nd stanza, 1st line; it's "too" no "to." eh?
<3
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You're not old, you're young! You just don't see it yet...
You'll realize it when you're older.
XD
Welcome back?
Well, anywasz. . .
This is really good!
I don't see anything to fix!
You just rock!
<3
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"Don't Stop Believing"~Journey<3
Actaully this WOULD make a good hip hop song? Maybe a future career? eh eh?? lol
your writing always amazes me cuz its sooooo good. the words confuse me because ihavehalfabrain lol nah, jk
good job
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"There are many things my father taught me here in this room. He taught me: keep your friends close, but your enemies closer." Al Pacino in Godfather Part II (1974)
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All the good music has already been written by people with wigs and stuff.
~ Oscar Wilde
My music is music about music.
~ Ludwig van Beethoven
oh, yeah, i'll change it when i get on a faster computer.
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All the good music has already been written by people with wigs and stuff.
~ Oscar Wilde
My music is music about music.
~ Ludwig van Beethoven
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