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Hysteria by ~GrayAreas:iconGrayAreas:

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Severity increases
Equanimity ceases
Words spew in a flurry
Thoughts melt down to a slurry
A lucid psyche now breaks into pieces
©2007-2009 ~GrayAreas
:icongrayareas:

Author's Comments

i know, it's short

the first two lines came very easily, but the rest was hard.

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~realitykiller66 Oct 7, 2007, 3:17:05 PM
I love this. The shortness of it makes it simple, but the actual words make it deep. <3

--
You're not old, you're young! You just don't see it yet...
You'll realize it when you're older.

XD
:icondorkwithadream:
~dorkwithadream Oct 7, 2007, 3:51:55 PM
this is really really good :nod:
it doesn't matter if it's short, it has a deep essence and that's what is usually important. ^^
:iconkidsingerish:
~kidsingerish Oct 7, 2007, 5:14:20 PM
sorry to ruin the deep compelling, and otherwise aforementioned seriousness of this situation. How many people have I ever heard use equanimity? Thank you for that. k im good otherwise i really like this little limerick. what i dont like is dj in spandex but that is a different story

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So, its down to you and its down to me, but first here's something to know, what is there isn't always what you see
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~Rain-Abm Oct 7, 2007, 5:32:29 PM
Wow
<3
That is really good!

Who cares if it is short,
As long as you think it is good.

And if it helps,
I think tis ubber amazing
=D
:glomp:

--
"Don't Stop Believing"~Journey

Give you my heart, please keep it.
I'm still trying to see what love's all about.
:icongrayareas:
~GrayAreas Oct 7, 2007, 5:52:52 PM
do you know what equanimity means now?

--
“All the good music has already been written by people with wigs and stuff.”
~ Oscar Wilde

“My music is music about music.”
~ Ludwig van Beethoven
:iconkidsingerish:
~kidsingerish Oct 7, 2007, 6:05:00 PM
dude i believe i knew what it meant cuz i really dont know that many long words that begin with e. euphemistically and equanimity. but it means like calm-headed and even tempered right

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So, its down to you and its down to me, but first here's something to know, what is there isn't always what you see
:iconscaggie:
~Scaggie Oct 8, 2007, 1:58:33 AM
i love this. see, short poems, i think, are the hardest. you have manage to capture what you mean in a few simple senetences. great job!

--
"There are many things my father taught me here in this room. He taught me: keep your friends close, but your enemies closer." Al Pacino in Godfather Part II (1974)
:icongrayareas:
~GrayAreas Oct 8, 2007, 2:46:25 PM
si

--
“All the good music has already been written by people with wigs and stuff.”
~ Oscar Wilde

“My music is music about music.”
~ Ludwig van Beethoven
:icongrayareas:
~GrayAreas Oct 8, 2007, 2:47:23 PM
thanks.

i try.

--
“All the good music has already been written by people with wigs and stuff.”
~ Oscar Wilde

“My music is music about music.”
~ Ludwig van Beethoven
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